I like the first one, i think the color change and the black sqwiggle thing make it crouded. A banner should be clear, simple & to the point. It's almost never a good idea to add un-needed clutter or info. to a banner.
I know for my own creations, as well as when i see banners online, i am much more likely to pay attention to something that is simple, clear and to the point (like the first attempt). Rather than something that looks crouded or overdone.
As for the tag line change, that looks good. As long as its not made unnecesarily longer or bigger.
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